1st place: Dancergrlkr_1
Amazing job. I can really see you as a journalist for an expirenced magazine. You added all the main concepts and gave your oppion in a strong voice. Great job. Keep up the amazing work!
2nd place: lisa-marie9711
You did not do as good a job but you still did an ok job. Next time show some of your creativity and listen to the tasks better. I know you did not understand them very well but you can use a translator to help and if you like i will gladly translate the next task into spanish
3rd place: Katyperryfano6
I think napper18 one of the judges makes a good point she quotes "she is just kinda making it up, she doesn't tell me why she likes my style or anything." Now i even told you you needed to change some of it, that is was only a sentence and that the grammer was not good. But you did not change it even though you said you would so i have no choise but to eliminate you i am very sorry, you make try out for the next compition and take all my advice i have given you from this very first compition and use it on your next. You started off strong but you started driffting away. You have potential and it shines through you, but sometimes you do not always know how to show it.
Eliminated: Katyperryfano6
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